I felt quite frustrated when I checked my blog during the writing class this morning. The feedback that Bill gave me said that what I wrote is boring. Indeed, after I read it again, I found that there is nothing interesting things to arouse readers' interests. I didn't write enough details and information to let readers understand what I was talking about. For example, I shared about my trip on the last weekend in my latest blog, but I just wrote about the feeling hoe I feel but without any description about the places where I visited and also the views which I thought were special to me.
Bill also told us that it is very important to "think" whenever we write. Of course we still have our own writing styles, We don't need to worry about that. However, all I have to do now is to find out my common mistakes or problems like comma spice or verbose then improve them.
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